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My hands are tied, my mouth is taped
My heart is void, my body raped
My veins are slit, my mouth, it gapes
I’m stranded here with no escape

My life has passed, my death is near
My hope is gone, replaced by fear
I cannot shed another tear
My love is lost, my hate is here

My head is numb, my eyes are red
My face is streaked from tears I’ve shed
You’ll drain the blood I haven’t bled
I’m trusting you until I’m dead
©2008-2009 ~BeautyWillSaveUs
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Eh. This has been in the boneyard for a while. I fixed it up today. I'm out of school now, so expect new stuff soon.
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I love it! Keep up the great work!

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
This is one hell of a powerful poem !_!
Really, really awesome work. Can't wait to see more.
thank you! :hug:

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***Life is but a dream for the dead***
I'll try....:blowkiss:

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***Life is but a dream for the dead***
Alright......that's cool!

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"And if my lungs still let me breathe
Would you be there for me?
If I can make myself believe,
I'll give you back what you took away."

Smashed Into Pieces~ Silverstein
I love the four-line rhyming.

It has an intense rhythm...

Another nice one! :D

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Art is the birth from the hands to counter the death of the heart. It's the only place I can truly lose 'myself', and become... more than me. ~JRL~
Great use of rhyming. It's beautiful (in a morbid way). ;)

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"It was night, and the rain fell; and falling, it was rain, but, having fallen, it was blood."

MorticiaRose
Dig it.

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Save the whales. We'll eat em last.
wow, this is really good. I can feel the emotion u potray in it

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"It's a love story/Baby just say yes..."-Taylor Swift

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